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Sunny Beach Vacations

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Commission for :iconsonichomeboy:
It shows his characters Eddie and Lucy. It's my first picture with that new coloring style. I hope you'll enjoy! ^^

(I also will do my further digital commissions with that style if you wish.)
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:iconanthro-feedback: You have submitted! And now I will offer you some Feedback :)

Remember this is subjective and can be ignored or taken into account, whichever you desire.


Likes and Kudos about this:

The Colouring! very lively and summer like, give and feeling of brightness. While it can look plain and with no real contrast, I feel it is still very unique and grants focus on the characters. A nice and Cartoony background style, only supporting what I've stated above :XD:

Their facial expression Is very well done, However, I can't help to feel that their overall, facial shape (like forehead and neck) is a bit funky. Not sure if that would be considered good or bad. But still gives it an special look either way :)

Shading: I see a kind of cell shading, I've never seen before. Reminds me of some things I relate them to, like Pixel art. This is better than that. :)

Don't Like: Big noses, Long muzzles. This would be a personal preference, and have little to do with the subject at hand :XD:
Additional, the glare in their eyes seems too big, and could be greatly enhanced bu using two small white dots instead of one big one. Not to say, They still do their job and shows the glare. :)

Thanks for submitting. have a wonderful summer! :meow: